Our review of our children's film opening

Good points
. Introduction of characters --> speech gives information about Edd and Mia
. Effects --> use of glitter gives a 'magical' effect, book opening on its own
. Animation --> girl moving on path (links to editing also)
. Sound --> voice over works well with the different parts of the sequence
. Transitions --> fading and cuts


Not so good points
. Camera --> could've been more stable at times and there could've been more angles
. Sound --> could've varied the music more
. Transitions --> some of the transitions could've been smoother
. Credits --> added more credits/ production company etc
. Mise-en-scene --> we could have made it more clear where it was going to be sent